I'm on the computer 24/7 no lie i might be half robot. I'm just gonna write a lil something somethin everyday, call it a freestyle or freewrite whatever. Do critique it i can take constructive criticism lol you can be an ass to if it makes you feel better. I'll try to do like a topic or something, but mostly its off the top so it is what it is. Hate it. Love it. Do whatever you want with it. Post your own idc.

Mainstream Fan (part one? I dunno agin its just off the top ;/ ):

Hip-Hop what it do Ima hit ya with the verbal one two
then take a run through like a kids first time in a zoo
In the language of rhyme I am a student hardly fluent
but i keep doin doin what im doin cus i wanna keep my mind groovin keep the bass boomin
when a dope lyric hits my ears i just gotta make a sound with it
gotta say "dayum!" and hear that shit agin
i got wet dreams of me bein sick with the pen
but im not im just a fan chillin in the stands
when you say HOOOOO i just clap my hands
and jump up jump up and get down
like some sorta clown

"Underground" (guy? fan? i dunno):

Hip-Hop aint just music its a movement and since you a student listen to one who's affluent
why you sittin in the stands like you aint a man? i watched ya mind get raped by the lyrical Taliban
You let the wack shit pollute ya ears, why you livin in fear?
you think the mainstream nigga gonna care if you dare to stop sendin fan mail?
you in a mental fan jail? well i got you some bail get the fuck off the flunkee boat and make your own sail

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Sketch Tha Cataclysm Comment by Sketch Tha Cataclysm on May 29, 2009 at 11:34pm
welcome back homie
S.Breezy Comment by S.Breezy on May 28, 2009 at 9:52pm
Been a lil while I'm tryna stack the cheese
but not out of greed I wanna live my dream
make beats produce maybe do a lil Emcin
just tryna find me in this human sea
Everyone trying to be all they can be its bound to lead to controversy
cause some ppl are fools and some are just jerks
the ones with the most power dont even work
in comparison to the ppl they treat like dirt
but they dont realize dirt is earth and that the very ground beneath them is feeling kinda hurt
so when the ground retaliates
their money wont be able to compensate
at least i hope so keep up the optimistic mind state
Sketch Tha Cataclysm Comment by Sketch Tha Cataclysm on April 6, 2009 at 9:31am
you will be hearing kazoos on tracks from me very soon. . . no lie lol. . .

The Protege EP drops tomorrow!!
S.Breezy Comment by S.Breezy on April 5, 2009 at 5:52pm
feelin kinda witty this the kid from the nowhere city
some look @ my life and say its pretty I wont lie livin here making me a hippy
but sometimes I wanna scream when I hear a happy diddy too much happy
makes dudes like me a lil crazy.
not shootin up schools but actin like a fool lose my cool
over some girl lookin cute and a cat treatin her like she a dude
usually real smooth never catch me actin uncouth
im tryna be the one makin the girls say "oh he so smooth"
been messin with the delivery but im tired of playin with my food
gonna start just spittin it and doin what I do
cus if you focus too much on sum litt-le
you lose track of what u set out ta do
then u gonna walk around look retarded blowin on a kazoo

(idk where tha kazoo thing came from ...outta the blue lol )
S.Breezy Comment by S.Breezy on February 25, 2009 at 9:56pm
verbally i am acidic P.H. ova 20 meltin everything when i spit it
so when i wen i kill an MC tryna battle me im instantly aquitted
the way i rhyme can only be invented by G but not G
not fa gangsta but for Genius aka ME
spittin that intellectual hetrosexual extra terrestrial supaspecial deep script
makin ya feel like its a horror movie and all ya bad deeds just jumped out tha crypt
diggin deep into ya mental sea ya cant fathom me i sneak thro ya radar like submarine
mind bogglin girl followin rhyme stoppin wild stampede
scary but neccesary to bury all the wack MCs i like that cats can read my speech
and still keep on beat.

(keeps ramblin on and on and on and on)
S.Breezy Comment by S.Breezy on February 18, 2009 at 1:06am
why you gotta hate and get in a heated debate?
cant you chill and contemplate on what THEY have to say?
Im not sayin it's easy or that I can do it well
aw hell i couldnt tell you how much i sail the hate flag ina gale
but what i fail to see is covered by rage and pain
hasty acts that made me fail
and now i feel with shame the problems Im left to blame
Me
S.Breezy Comment by S.Breezy on February 6, 2009 at 5:21am
the day you threw your gifts away


its frekin 5 A.M. I got literally no sleep...forgive mah ramblin just waitin for the day to start
S.Breezy Comment by S.Breezy on February 6, 2009 at 5:19am
got me thinkin bout how you doin?
ya you talkin to you aint got no one else to talk to
"man you a trip you just sick not in a good way
you cant sleep cus ur know you dirty and you're far from perfect
yet you walk around head held proud tellin folks who ask "Ya Im in college now"
makin ya fam proud but deep down
you know you can do more but you leavin ya gifts on the floor
soon theyll rot and decay then fade away
never to be replaced but stuck in your mental space
you will always relive that day
S.Breezy Comment by S.Breezy on February 6, 2009 at 5:10am
cant sleep stuck in the place between dreams and reality
cant see well I can but undoubtedly my eyes be lyin ta me
cant breath well I am but the air is stale not a fresh breeze from somewhere far away
these are just some of the symptoms of a sinner
guilty concious showin me how my morales grow thinner
I am weak but dont weep cus im a grinner
ya know the dude that seems to be cool and content
thats me but its a front cus im feelin spent
dispensed and use discarded and abused
S.Breezy Comment by S.Breezy on February 4, 2009 at 2:22pm
public fornication, child molestation (woah) , DUI, and FYI Michael called askin "Are you finished with the child?"
you dame faced fool I aint done yet, because you walkin around like a mic Vet.
I knew you was a rookie though cus u spit like ya 1st time in bed
You a battle virgin who forgot the rubba for ya head
didnt know im sicka than a STD but quicka cus you already dead


Two i posted today go together posting via PSP. It actually sounds better in real life lol. I used it today lol school battlin heh

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